Self love

               Self -love 

When in the dawn 

I was walking in the lawn, 

I discerned a ray in- built

Which penetrated and took away all my guilt.


I realized the best form of love

To forgive all and let go all the gruff.

It is not the offender who is freed

It is the victim who is liberated.


The best gift you could preserve 

To earn peace that you deserve.

Apology and forgiveness cleared my vision 

The dusk took away my sense of reason.


When I walked by the shore 

I could not ask for more

I discovered the beauty of satisfaction 

And developed an immense compassion.


That's nature where you come in contact with God 

And let go off all tensions in one shot. 


Chaitali 


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Comments

  1. Oh mine! This is just an amazing piece!! Truth of life. Self love is more than any love. ❤️😍

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    1. Just peep into your ownself to discover this truth of life and love yourself to the utmost. 💝

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    2. you should become a poet
      you have written the best poem I have ever seen

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    3. Hey thanks.... Keep reading.. 💕

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  2. Wow ma'am 💗
    Amazing views of yours✨👏👏

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    1. It's the creator of nature who instills such views in me. 💝

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  3. What a mesmerizing poem 🤩😍👏🏻

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  4. WoW..!!!!
    Just Amazing, Wonderful , Awesome, Mesmerizing poem.....
    Enjoyed reading it :)
    Self Love ❣️

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  5. Just amazing poem🤩👏🏻👍🏻
    Looking you as a best poet..😊😊

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  6. I am not having words to express myself ma'am, it's truly more than amazing! ✨✨✨

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  7. Wow ma'am
    Amazing poem👍👍👍

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  8. Superb poem!
    Teaches a lot on living with compassion and Satisfaction
    Awesome👌👏
    ~Jagavi

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  9. If you truly feel that.... then make it a point to live in that way.

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  10. WoW,WoW,WoW and WoW🤩🤩
    I don’t have any words ma’am
    This poem has just passed through my heart😊😍
    It indeed carries a unique message with it...
    If I describe it in a single word then it’s just incredible!!!!
    -Maitri

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    1. Hmm !! Your comments are a treasure. Love you. 💝😘😘😘😘

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  11. Maam this is just amazing 👏 🤩🤩

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  12. amazing
    this is mind blowing poem

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  13. WOW MA'AM YOU ARE REALLY A GOOD WRITER. THESE WORDS PASSED THROUGH MY HEART.

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  14. WOWOOOOO MAAM WHAT A POEM IS IT ITS AMAZING IT JUST HURTS ME THAT WHY DONT I LIVE IN THAT WAY ITS JUST MARVELLOUS !!!😍😍😍😍

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    1. Then make it a point from now itself to live in this way. Then only will my poem be a worth. 💝

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  15. Hats off mam
    i loved it very much
    I even learned so many words from the poem
    a big plus for you mam

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  16. Wow maam its marvelous
    I loved it 🥰🥰
    There are many new words
    I am impressed😃😃

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  17. mam this is a amazing poem these words passed through my heart .

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  18. ma'am amazing !!! it was so deep !.... loved it like anything .

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  19. Ma'am Just WOW This poem is so good😊😊😍😍

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  20. woah,its amazing!mam i loved it.loved it very much!!

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    1. Really!!! Then just follow it in your living style. 💝

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  21. Ma'am what a nice poem you written!!!👌🏻👌🏻
    Just no words to say...🥰🥰

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  22. Such a mind-blowing poem ma'am!
    I really have no words to describe it!
    Hats off to the mesmerising poet in you!
    Lots of love,
    Anushka

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  23. MESMERISING, MIND BLOWING,OUTSTANDING....
    I loved this poem of yours...
    Sometimes I doubt that why are you a teacher..you should be the greatest poet of the time...
    Truly...the words passed through my heart ❣
    Keep writing more poems ...
    -Khushi

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  24. MESMERISING, MIND BLOWING,OUTSTANDING....
    I loved this poem of yours...
    Sometimes I doubt that why are you a teacher..you should be the greatest poet of the time...
    Truly...the words passed through my heart ❣
    Keep writing more poems ...
    -Khushi

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  25. Wow 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
    What a poem!!
    Great mam 😊

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