Self love
Self -love
When in the dawn
I was walking in the lawn,
I discerned a ray in- built
Which penetrated and took away all my guilt.
I realized the best form of love
To forgive all and let go all the gruff.
It is not the offender who is freed
It is the victim who is liberated.
The best gift you could preserve
To earn peace that you deserve.
Apology and forgiveness cleared my vision
The dusk took away my sense of reason.
When I walked by the shore
I could not ask for more
I discovered the beauty of satisfaction
And developed an immense compassion.
That's nature where you come in contact with God
And let go off all tensions in one shot.
Oh mine! This is just an amazing piece!! Truth of life. Self love is more than any love. ❤️😍
ReplyDeleteJust peep into your ownself to discover this truth of life and love yourself to the utmost. 💝
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Hey thanks.... Keep reading.. 💕
DeleteWow ma'am 💗
ReplyDeleteAmazing views of yours✨👏👏
It's the creator of nature who instills such views in me. 💝
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ReplyDeleteTruly feels good to hear from you. 💝
DeleteWoW..!!!!
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Enjoyed reading it :)
Self Love ❣️
So many words of appreciation... Wow!!! 💝
DeleteJust amazing poem🤩👏🏻👍🏻
ReplyDeleteLooking you as a best poet..😊😊
The recognition means a lot. 🌹
DeleteI am not having words to express myself ma'am, it's truly more than amazing! ✨✨✨
ReplyDelete- Maanushree
DeleteSuch kind words make my writing worth.💝
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ReplyDeleteAmazing poem👍👍👍
- Devansh
DeleteThank you dear Devansh.
DeleteSuperb poem!
ReplyDeleteTeaches a lot on living with compassion and Satisfaction
Awesome👌👏
~Jagavi
If you truly feel that.... then make it a point to live in that way.
ReplyDeleteyes ma'am😊
DeleteYES MAAM WILL SURELY TRY TO LIVE IN THAT WAY
DeleteWoW,WoW,WoW and WoW🤩🤩
ReplyDeleteI don’t have any words ma’am
This poem has just passed through my heart😊😍
It indeed carries a unique message with it...
If I describe it in a single word then it’s just incredible!!!!
-Maitri
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ReplyDelete-Shikha
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ReplyDeleteWOWOOOOO MAAM WHAT A POEM IS IT ITS AMAZING IT JUST HURTS ME THAT WHY DONT I LIVE IN THAT WAY ITS JUST MARVELLOUS !!!😍😍😍😍
ReplyDeleteThen make it a point from now itself to live in this way. Then only will my poem be a worth. 💝
DeleteHats off mam
ReplyDeletei loved it very much
I even learned so many words from the poem
a big plus for you mam
krishnapriya
DeleteOh my dear Krishnapriya !! It's a pleasure to see your analysis. 💝
DeleteThank you for the plus grade.
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There are many new words
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Good that you learn in this way too.
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ReplyDeleteshragvi-
DeleteReally... Then just follow it in your life.
DeleteMa'am its amazing
ReplyDeleteThank you so much dear.
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ReplyDeleteJust no words to say...🥰🥰
Thank you darling. 💝
DeleteSuch a mind-blowing poem ma'am!
ReplyDeleteI really have no words to describe it!
Hats off to the mesmerising poet in you!
Lots of love,
Anushka
Such words of appreciation keep me going...
Delete:D
DeleteMESMERISING, MIND BLOWING,OUTSTANDING....
ReplyDeleteI loved this poem of yours...
Sometimes I doubt that why are you a teacher..you should be the greatest poet of the time...
Truly...the words passed through my heart ❣
Keep writing more poems ...
-Khushi
MESMERISING, MIND BLOWING,OUTSTANDING....
ReplyDeleteI loved this poem of yours...
Sometimes I doubt that why are you a teacher..you should be the greatest poet of the time...
Truly...the words passed through my heart ❣
Keep writing more poems ...
-Khushi
Ha ha ha Khushi... What a compliment!! 💝😘
DeleteWow 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
ReplyDeleteWhat a poem!!
Great mam 😊
Thank you dear.
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